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planet Shenal
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attributes sheragi
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landscape land/forest3
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description "On Shenal, cities sprawl across the globe, ever increasing to accomodate for the growing Sheragi population. This planet is the most densely populated in the entirety of Alrodel, even more so than the capital system."
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description "On Shenal, cities sprawl across the globe, ever increasing to accommodate for the growing Sheragi population. This planet is the most densely populated in the entirety of Alrodel, even more so than the capital system."
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description "This also is where the main Sheragi government buildings and homes are."
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spaceport "The spaceport here is fairly standard for the Sheragi, with large hexagonal landing pads and transports hurrying about, ferrying people to and fro between the spaceport and surrounding city."
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outfitter "Sheragi Basics"
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planet Lamalmuq
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attributes jibauni pilgrims tourism
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landscape land/farm3
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description "This planet seems to have some sort of religious significance to the Jbauni. There are many of them here, wearing simple black robes and walking in twos and threes. There also seem to be many religious buildings and none of the pubs and bars expected on a normal planet. No screens or personal tablets are evident, but billboards are posted all over the place advertising something impossible to read."
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description "This planet seems to have some sort of religious significance to the Jibauni. There are many of them here, wearing simple black robes and walking in twos and threes. There also seem to be many religious buildings and none of the pubs and bars expected on a normal planet. No screens or personal tablets are evident, but billboards are posted all over the place advertising something impossible to read."
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spaceport "The spaceport here has many ships landing and taking off. But there are not many cargo handling facilities, and only a few ships look as if they were built for carrying cargo, while the number of passenger transports is great. Many Jibauni are in the bustle of security and luggage scanning that is common to most Jibauni worlds. There is only one city; all the rest of the planet seems untouched by the Jibauni."
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government Jibauni
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outfitter Lamalmuq
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planet Muntisir
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attributes jibauni "rebel jibauni"
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landscape land/ocean2
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description "This is where the Rebel Jibauni movement started, and where most of the Rebel population live. Many of them work in this city, where you lands, but there are cities far and wide across the planet, though most of those cites look to be quite small, smaller then this one which is none too large itself. There are also many oceans on this planet."
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description "This is where the Rebel Jibauni movement started, and where most of the Rebel population live. Many of them work in the city where you landed, but there are cities far and wide across the planet, though most of those cites look to be smaller then this one, which is none too large itself. There are also many oceans on this planet."
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spaceport "The facilities of all kinds here are quite large, this planet having one of the best of the Jibauni spaceports. Rumor has it that there are secret passageways all over underneath the spaceport, and that in fact the whole spaceport is a cover for something far bigger that the Rebel Jibauni are building."
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government "Jibauni (Rebel)"
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shipyard "Jibauni Advanced"
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description "This is the first planet the Rebel Jibauni have terraformed. Unfortunately, they seem to have only cared about external looks, because even a little outside the city, the true landscape takes over and rock strikes in."
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description ""
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description "This planet is also a mining planet, so the rock has great scars in it at places and there are many machines to do the digging, scattered around parked and looking very untidy."
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spaceport "When coming down for landing, most of what can be seen is rock, though ships above the city see nothing but planets and trees, due to the haphazard nature of the Rebels that terraformed this planet. Hovber, once down the street are wide and cool, with luxurious buildings and shady pathways."
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spaceport "When coming down for landing, most of what can be seen is rock, though ships above the city see nothing but planets and trees, due to the haphazard nature of the Rebels that terraformed this planet. However, once down, the streets are wide and cool, with luxurious buildings and shady pathways."
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government "Jibauni (Rebel)"
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planet Andwerfen
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attributes capital jibauni "rebel jibauni" "seat of government"
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landscape land/rocks1
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description "The place where the Rebels have their government is evident, because there are many fortified buildings and bunkers in readiness to shoot any invaders, and the many planetary defenses are very powerful."
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description "That this is the place where the Rebels have their government is easy to see, because there are many fortified buildings and bunkers in readiness to shoot any invaders, and the many planetary defenses are very powerful."
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spaceport "Little is here except for the many armed patrols the Rebel Jibauni keep patrolling the neighborhoods, looking for disrupters of the peace. The Jibauni around you all look frightened, and the number here that must wish to get back to normal Jibauni space must be large."
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system Taniyn
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planet Zigzogzinzo
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attributes sheragi
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landscape land/valley9
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description "Zigzogzinzo is the primary economic centre of Sheragi space, all trading and business runs through the cloud cities here, in one way or another. The vast wealth that flows through this planet has led to it being the home of many of the wealthiest citizens. Rumour has it that near the top of the economic food chain of rich business owners is a Jibauni."
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description "Zigzogzinzo is the primary economic centre of Sheragi space, all trading and business runs through the cloud cities here, in one way or another. The vast wealth that flows through this planet has led to it being the home of many of the wealthiest citizens. Rumor has it that near the top of the economic food chain of rich business owners is a Jibauni."
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spaceport "Due to the sheer amount of money on Zigzogzinzo, the floating spaceport is so fancy that you feel slightly bad for scuffing your shoes along the gleaming white floor. They also seem to have made the spaceport with a set of viewing windows for the landscape."
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government "Sheragi (Jibauni)"
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shipyard "Sheragi Basics"
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planet Bilinson
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attributes "rebel sheragi" sheragi
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landscape land/badlands4
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description "The life of a Pirate is hard, but the inhabitents of Bilinson have managed to eke out a living. In fact, they are doing quite well, having access to most Sheragi technology and ships."
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description "The life of a Pirate is hard, but the inhabitants of Bilinson have managed to eke out a living. In fact, they are doing quite well, having access to most Sheragi technology and ships."
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spaceport "The main facilities here are devoted to production. While the ships made here are few, outfits are in abundance and are not few."
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government "Sheragi (Pirate)"
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outfitter "Sheragi Basics"

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