Jibauni: more heavily imply that they are dinosaurs

Author: TheGiraffe3

data/jibauni/jibauni 0 kanlanmo transport.txt

@@ -436,32 +436,31 @@ mission "Jibauni: Kanlanmo books elsewhere"
 		not "Jibauni: Kanlanmo 3: offered"
 	on offer
 		conversation
-			`A call comes in from Kanlanmo the moment you get reception. He sounds quite angry as he yells, "You were supposed to meet me in the spaceport of <destination>! I am late for an important meeting now!"`
+			`A call comes in from Kanlanmo the moment you get reception. He roars angrily, "You were supposed to meet me in the spaceport of <destination>! I am late for an important meeting now!"`
 			choice
 				`	"I had other things to do."`
 				`	"Does it really matter?"`
 				`	"Why should I care?"`
 					goto rude
 				`	(Cut off the call.)`
 					goto cutoff
-			label doesntmatter
 			`	"So? It matters very deeply; no matter what else needed to happen, this takes priority. A small Rebel Furus? Preposterous compared to what is going on here!"`
 				goto end
 			label rude
 			`	"Because you said that you liked the Jibauni. It seems that you loathe us as much as the Rebels do!"`
 				goto end
 			label cutoff
 			action
-				log `Got in big trouble for being rude to Kanlanmo. Work for the Jibauni seems to have stopped.`
+				log `Got in big trouble for being rude to Kanlanmo; the Jibauni government doesn't seem to want to hire anymore.`
 				"reputation: Jibauni" = -1000
 				"reputation: Jibauni (Civilian)" = -1000
-				"reputation: Jibauni (Rebel)" = 0
+				"reputation: Jibauni (Rebel)" = 5
 			`	As soon as you end the call, a Jibauni arrives in front of your ship and calls out, "You have dishonored one of our leaders. You shall leave now."`
 			`	You see the defense mechanisms of <origin> preparing to open fire on the <ship> and decide to leave before anything else happens. Perhaps the Rebel Jibauni will take you in.`
 				flee
 			label end
 			action
-				log `Refrained from meeting Kanlanmo in the spaceport of Kahbani, and got told off by him for not doing so. The Jibauni don't love that and have restricted access to all worlds.`
+				log `Refrained from meeting Kanlanmo in the spaceport of Kahbani, and got told off by him for not doing so. The Jibauni disliked that and restricted access to all worlds.`
 				"reputation: Jibauni" = 0
 				"reputation: Jibauni (Civilian)" = 0
 				"reputation: Jibauni (Rebel)" += 10
@@ -485,12 +484,9 @@ mission "Jibauni: Kanlanmo 3"
 				`	(Ask what is wrong.)`
 					goto question
 				`	(Leave him alone, he has enough problems already.)`
-					goto leavehim
-			label leavehim
 			`	Kanlanmo greets you as he comes in, then heads toward his cabin. He then appears to change his mind, and comes back toward you.`
 			choice
 				`	"What happened?"`
-					goto question
 				`	"I'm kind of busy, can we talk later?"`
 					goto destination
 			label question
@@ -509,15 +505,15 @@ mission "Jibauni: Kanlanmo 3"
 					goto singleship
 				`	"That's sad."`
 					goto prechoicetake
-			`	"Great," he says. "I have seen your big fleet, and it does look powerful."`
+			`	"Great," he says. "I have seen your fleet, and it does look powerful."`
 				goto thanksoffer
 			label fleetsmall
 			`	"Good! Because do you know what? Every little bit counts, and your fleet is not insignificant."`
 				goto thanksoffer
 			label singleship
 			`	"Thanks. Even if <ship> could not hurt a fly, the Rebel Jibauni would not like the idea of an alien fighting on our side."`
 			label thanksoffer
-			`	"Anyway, thank you for offering to help fight the Rebels. It is very kind of you, a stranger, to fight in our internal conflicts. Now, one more thing. Can you take me back to <planet>? I need to report back to The Leaders."`
+			`	He continues, "Anyway, thank you for offering to help fight the Rebels. It is very kind of you, a stranger, to fight in our internal conflicts. Now, one more thing. Can you take me back to <planet>? I need to report back to The Leaders."`
 				goto choicetake
 			label destination
 			`	"Good," he says. "By later I assume you mean once we are back on <planet>? Will you take me there?"`
@@ -527,12 +523,9 @@ mission "Jibauni: Kanlanmo 3"
 			label choicetake
 			choice
 				`	"Of course!"`
-					goto accept
 				`	"Why not?"`
-					goto accept
 				`	"No, I have had enough of working with the Jibauni."`
 					decline
-			label accept
 			`	"Thank you for all your hard work, <first>. It really means a lot to us."`
 				accept
 	on accept
@@ -568,7 +561,7 @@ mission "Jibauni: Kanlanmo 4"
 				`	"Pleased to meet you."`
 				`	"What ships does he make?"`
 					goto ships
-				`	(Nod.)`
+				`	(Nod to him.)`
 					goto nod
 			`	He reaches out his hand, and you shake it. "What ships do your shipyards make?" you ask.`
 				goto ships
@@ -582,7 +575,7 @@ mission "Jibauni: Kanlanmo 4"
 					goto meetingresults
 				`	"Kasim, what are the one or two other ships you do not make?"`
 			`	"To be specific, the Daybal and the Muraw. The Daybal is a not-great cargo carrying drone, but the Muraw has a turret mount on a fighter. Those crazy people of Res-redi's Sh-"`
-			`	"The results of the meeting," Kanlanmo says icily, "are that the leaders are very pleased. They did not expect Hajay to contribute any ships at all, so the few promised are a great boon to them. Well, now you know. Anything else?"`
+			`	Kanlanmo interrupts with a roar. "The results of the meeting are that the leaders are very pleased. They did not expect Hajay to contribute any ships at all, so the few promised are a great boon to them. Well, now you know. Anything else?"`
 				goto ok
 			label meetingresults
 			`	"The leaders are very pleased. They did not expect Hajay to contribute any ships at all, so the few promised are a great boon to them. Well, now you know. Anything else?"`

data/jibauni/jibauni culture conversations.txt

@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ mission "Jibauni Culture: Steak Lovers"
 		random < 4
 	on offer
 		conversation
-			`When you land on <origin>, you notice a group of smaller Jibauni, probably children, digging a hole in the ground. As you watch, one of them finds a box with three large pieces of unidentifiable meat inside. The group immediately devours the treat.`
+			`When you land on <origin>, you notice a group of smaller Jibauni, probably children, digging a hole in the ground. As you watch, one of them finds a box with three large pieces of unidentifiable meat inside and roars with delight. The group immediately devours the treat.`
 				decline
 
 mission "Jibauni Culture: Rebel Report"
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ mission "Rebel Jibauni Culture: Rude Rebel"
 				`	(Quietly leave.)`
 					goto walkedaway
 			label rude
-			`	"What!" yells the Rebel. "That is an insult! I cannot ignore this direct affront to my dignity!"`
+			`	"What!" roars the Rebel. "That is an insult! I cannot ignore this direct affront to my dignity!"`
 				goto talkbattle
 			label Iwasinsulted
 			`	"Who cares," remarks the Rebel. "I sure do not, for one thing, and I doubt anyone else does either."`

data/jibauni/jibauni jobs.txt

@@ -252,6 +252,28 @@ mission "Jibauni Passengers [2]"
 		payment 2000
 		dialog "As the group of Jibauni go out of your ship, they each hand you 1/<bunks>th of <payment>."
 
+mission "Jibauni Clumsy Passengers"
+	name "Passengers to <planet>"
+	description "Take these <bunks> passengers to <planet> for <payment>."
+	job
+	repeat
+	passengers 2 30
+	source
+		government "Jibauni" "Jibauni (Rebel)"
+	to offer
+		has "language: Jibauni"
+		random < 8
+		not "Jibauni Clumsy Passengers: active"
+	destination
+		distance 1 4
+		not planet Laqualk
+	on enter
+	on enter
+		dialog "During the jump to this system, one of the Jibauni bumped into a bulkhead."
+	on complete
+		payment
+		dialog "The <bunks> passengers get off your ship to do whatever they wanted to go here for, but not before they pay you <payment>."
+
 mission "Jibauni Rush Delivery [0]"
 	name "Rush to <planet>"
 	description "A character on <planet> is in dire need of <cargo> before <day>. Get it there by then for the reward of <payment>."

data/jibauni/jibauni missions.txt

@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ mission "Jibauni: Ru-win 4"
 				`	"I think Winter. It's a busy planet with a lot of people on it."`
 				`	"I'll take you to Solace. It's a forest planet with some people but not too many."`
 					goto solace
-			`	"If this planet is busy, as you say, then what are the chances of us being seen? Dinosaurs roaming around, will they be received well? Somehow I doubt it," returns Ru-win. "Do you know of a less busy planet?"`
+			`	"If this planet is busy, as you say, then what are the chances of us being seen? Strange aliens roaming around, will they be received well? Somehow I doubt it," returns Ru-win. "Do you know of a less busy planet?"`
 			choice
 				`	"How about Solace? It's not that busy, and I believe it would adequately suit your needs."`
 			label solace
@@ -347,18 +347,18 @@ mission "Jibauni: Ru-win 4"
 				`	(Ignore it.)`
 					goto jibaunireported
 			`	"Quickly, everyone. Get back into the <npc>!" you call. "We don't want to be seen!"`
-			`	You and the Jibauni are able to hide before anybody or anything spots you. Safe for now.`
+			`	You and the Jibauni are able to hide before anybody or anything spots you - the speed of the aliens is almost frightening, given their bulk.`
 			`	Once the plane is gone, Ru-win requests that you escort her ship back to <destination> immediately.`
 				launch
 			label destroyedairplane
 			action
-				"reputation: Merchant" -= 1000 # This does not affect reputation with the major human governments such as FW or Republic; if the player is also doing their storyline at the time there could be trouble.
+				"reputation: Merchant" -= 1000 # This does not affect reputation with the major human governments such as FW or Republic; if the player is also doing their storyline at the time there could be compatibility trouble.
 				event "ruwin: merchant reputation back to normal" 3
 			`	A well-placed shot from the <ship> sends the plane crashing to the ground as you realize that this could be trouble later.`
 			`	A member of Ru-win's crew tells you that they are ready to go. Soon you leave <planet stopovers>, hoping that nobody will find out what has happened.`
 				launch
 			label jibaunireported
-			`	After some time observing the flora and fauna in <planet stopovers>'s forests, you hear a loudspeaker in the direction of the <ship>; apparently people are approaching. Ru-win hurries up to you and requests that you escort her and her crew back to <destination> immediately, before the humans arrive. You agree.`
+			`	After some time observing the flora and fauna of <planet stopovers>'s forests, you hear a loudspeaker in the direction of the <ship>; apparently people are approaching. Ru-win hurries up to you and requests that you escort her and her crew back to <destination> immediately, before the humans arrive. You agree.`
 			`	The Jibauni and you make it back to your respective ships in the nick of time, leaving moments before a search party breaks out of the woods and into the clearing the <ship> and the <npc> were landed in.`
 				launch
 	on visit

data/jibauni/jibauni news.txt

@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ news "jibauni merchant"
 		word
 			`"`
 
-news "jibauni regular"
+news "regular jibauni"
 	name
 		word
 			"Jibauni"
@@ -255,6 +255,8 @@ news "jibauni regular"
 			"Some say the best way to win is to lose."
 			"Up for a game of chess?"
 			"I like strategy games. The best one is the new Aludi Harb A'lihia - especially because it's updated every time a new battle is fought between us and the Rebels."
+			"Some of the racers here go up to thousands of meters a second. How do they go so fast?"
+			"Y'know, the best way to win a race is to frighten opponents by roaring."
 		word
 			`"`
 

data/jibauni/rebel jibauni 0 consultations.txt

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
 
 mission "First Contact: Rebel Jibauni"
 	name "Travel to <planet>"
-	description `Travel to <destination> to meet up with the leaders of this "Rebel Jibauni" faction.`
+	description `Travel to <destination> to meet up with the leaders of the "Rebel Jibauni" faction.`
 	landing
 	source
 		government "Jibauni (Rebel)"
@@ -98,11 +98,9 @@ mission "Rebel Jibauni: Landed on Andwerfen"
 			`A long wait ensues after you land on <origin>. The Rebel Jibauni seem to be trying to find someone you can speak your language. Feeling bored, you wonder about going to see what's happening.`
 			choice
 				`	(Hey, it's better then staying here the rest of the day.)`
-					goto explore
 				`	(You have no idea what this world is about, and don't want to wander unbidden.)`
 					goto stay
-			label explore
-			`	Wandering around the spaceport of <origin>, the people do not seem very happy, and make way for you without being asked. But at last, you run into a Jibauni who has something around its neck. It gives an exclamation of surprise, and then asks in a language that you can easily understand, "Why have you not come before? I will take you to the government building." It drags you through the city, and then down a side alley. After a long climp up a ramp, you enter a room which has a congregation of dinosaurs.`
+			`	As you wander around the spaceport of <origin>, you notice the unhappy residents make way, even in the thickest crowds, without being asked. At last, you run into a Jibauni who has something around its neck. It gives an exclamation of surprise, and then asks in a language that you can easily understand, "Why have you not come before? I will take you to the government building." It drags you through the city, and then down a side alley. After a long climp up a ramp, you enter a room which has a congregation of dinosaurs.`
 				goto conversation
 			label stay
 			`	After a few more hours, a Rebel comes rushing up, full of apologies. "I am so sorry. The leaders had different things to do, and the person supposed to find you was ambushed. Come with me now though for a consultation." It pulls you, with remarkable speed, through the streets of the city. Finally, after ducking down a side alley and going up a wide stairway, you are led into a room with a congregation of dinosaurs in it.`
@@ -144,7 +142,6 @@ mission "Rebel Jibauni: Landed on Andwerfen"
 			`	Do you want to leave? They are threatening, but may not actually mean it.`
 			choice
 				`	(No. They are surely joking.)`
-					goto joking
 				`	(Get out of here, now.)`
 					goto nowleave
 			label joking

data/jibauni/rebel jibauni missions.txt

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
 mission "Rebel Jibauni: Qui-ni"
 	minor
 	name "Rebel Jibauni transport"
-	description "You bumped into a Rebel Jibauni in <origin>'s spaceport and agreed to take it to <destination>."
+	description "You bumped into a Rebel Jibauni in <origin>'s spaceport and agreed to take him to <destination>."
 	source
 		government "Jibauni (Rebel)"
 	destination Kanlil