More outfit description updates

I expect check failures.

Author: TheGiraffe3

data/jibauni/jibauni outfits.txt

@@ -69,7 +69,8 @@ outfit "Eimlaq Steering"
 	"steering flare sprite" "effect/atomic flare/large"
 		"frame rate" 11
 	"steering flare sound" "eimlaq engines"
-	description "The Eimlaq Steering - along with the thruster set under the same name, this was the greatest invention of the company that first produced them, Darro-ol. These huge fire gusters produce large amounts of flame, driving Jibauni ships with great speed."
+	description "The Eimlaq Steering - along with the thruster set under the same name - are the greatest invention of the company that first produced them, Darro-ol. These huge rockets produce large amounts of flame, driving Jibauni ships with great speed."
+	description "	Jibauni engines are mainly powered by fuel, so all spacecraft the Jibauni produce use generators to match."
 
 outfit "Eimlaq Thrusters"
 	plural "Eimlaq Thrusters"
@@ -87,6 +88,8 @@ outfit "Eimlaq Thrusters"
 	"flare sprite" "effect/atomic flare/huge"
 		"frame rate" 10
 	"flare sound" "eimlaq engines"
+	description "The Eimlaq Thrusters - along with the steering set under the same name - are the greatest invention of the company that first produced them, Darro-ol. These huge rockets produce large amounts of flame, driving Jibauni ships with great speed."
+	description "	Jibauni engines are mainly powered by fuel, so all spacecraft the Jibauni produce use generators to match."
 
 outfit "Wasita Steering"
 	category "Engines"
@@ -104,6 +107,8 @@ outfit "Wasita Steering"
 	"steering flare sprite" "effect/atomic flare/tiny"
 		"frame rate" 11
 	"steering flare sound" "wasita engines"
+	description "Surprisingly, the Wasita Steering and its parallel thruster set were the first engines produced by the Jibauni which remain in existence today. Now, the Wasita pair are produced by Aboagye Shipyards, even though their rivals from Res-redi use them sometimes."
+	description "	Jibauni engines are mainly powered by fuel, so all spacecraft the Jibauni produce use generators to match."
 
 outfit "Wasita Thrusters"
 	category "Engines"
@@ -121,6 +126,8 @@ outfit "Wasita Thrusters"
 	"flare sprite" "effect/atomic flare/small"
 		"frame rate" 10
 	"flare sound" "wasita engines"
+	description "Surprisingly, the Wasita Thrusters and their parallel steering set were the first engines produced by the Jibauni which remain in existence today. Now, the Wasita pair are produced by Aboagye Shipyards, even though Aboagye's rivals from Res-redi use them sometimes."
+	description "	Jibauni engines are mainly powered by fuel, so all spacecraft the Jibauni produce use generators to match."
 
 outfit "Alhaja Steering"
 	category "Engines"
@@ -137,6 +144,8 @@ outfit "Alhaja Steering"
 	"steering flare sprite" "effect/atomic flare/tiny"
 		"frame rate" 11
 	"steering flare sound" "alhaja engines"
+	description "Any Jibauni who must fly a fighter or other small ship thanks Res-redi for its Alhaja inventions. The latest Jibauni engines to be designed, the Alhaja pair is used to power only the smallest of Jibauni ships - many of which are made by Res-redi's rival Aboagye Shipyards."
+	description "	Jibauni engines are mainly powered by fuel, so all spacecraft the Jibauni produce use generators to match."
 
 outfit "Alhaja Thrusters"
 	category "Engines"
@@ -153,6 +162,8 @@ outfit "Alhaja Thrusters"
 	"flare sprite" "effect/atomic flare/small"
 		"frame rate" 10
 	"flare sound" "alhaja engines"
+	description "Any Jibauni who must fly a fighter or other small ship thanks Res-redi for its Alhaja inventions. The latest Jibauni engines to be designed, the Alhaja pair is used to power only the smallest of Jibauni ships - many of which are made by Res-redi's rival Aboagye Shipyards."
+	description "	Jibauni engines are mainly powered by fuel, so all spacecraft the Jibauni produce use generators to match."
 
 
 outfit "Jibauni Small Laser"
@@ -180,7 +191,7 @@ outfit "Jibauni Small Laser"
 		"parallel"
 		"hit force" 1.2
 		"phasing"
-	description "A small Jibauni laser, this is mostly found on the ships that cannot support more heavy ordnance."
+	description "The developers of the Jibauni Small Laser, Res-redi, have realized that they only sell to small ships, as larger ones can support heavier ordnance."
 
 outfit "Jibauni Medium Laser"
 	category "Guns"
@@ -205,7 +216,7 @@ outfit "Jibauni Medium Laser"
 		"reload" 1
 		"hit force" 3
 		"phasing"
-	description "This is a semi-powerful laser that is mostly used on the large Jibauni ships. Although it cannot stay in one place for more than a second, it still does enough damage to be worth it."
+	description "Aboagye Shipyards, the producer of this weapon, was delighted when even Res-redi had to admit its excellence and install it on the Yiyharsi."
 
 
 outfit "Small Map"
@@ -221,10 +232,10 @@ outfit "Minjal"
 	category "Hand to Hand"
 	cost 12000
 	thumbnail "outfit/minjal"
-	"capture attack" 4
+	"capture attack" 2
 	"capture defense" 0.5
 	"unplunderable" 1
-	"description" "While the Jibauni Minjal is not that useful for hiding behind bulkheads to defend, it is very good in close attack fighting."
+	description "The Jibauni Minjal has had a long history of use in skirmishes, especially before spacecraft were discovered. Nowadays its defensive power is limited by restrictive bulkheads, and the Minjal is only useful when fighting in close quarters."
 
 
 outfit "Aljaraar Tractor Beam"
@@ -246,7 +257,7 @@ outfit "Aljaraar Tractor Beam"
 		"reload" 1
 		"firing energy" 2.3
 		"firing fuel" .2
-	description "The Aljaraar Tractor Beam, while invented primarily to gather harvested asteroid bits, has been put by the Rebels to the very different use of gathering flotsam from destroyed enemy ships."
+	description "The Aljaraar Tractor Beam, while initially invented to gather harvested asteroid parts, has been put by the Rebel Jibauni to the very different use of gathering flotsam from destroyed enemy ships."
 
 
 outfit "Lilsa Anti-Missile"
@@ -266,7 +277,7 @@ outfit "Lilsa Anti-Missile"
 		"firing fuel" 0.1
 		"reload" 5
 		"firing heat" 3
-	description "The Lilsa Anti-Missile operates in a quite different manner to most other anti-missiles. While they zap lasers at incoming hostile projectiles, the Lilsa sprays burning fuel at targets, causing them to explode before coming to the ship it is installed on."
+	description "The Lilsa Anti-Missile operates in a quite different manner to most other anti-missiles. While they zap lasers at incoming hostile projectiles, the Lilsa sprays burning fuel at targets, causing them to explode before arriving at the ship the Lilsa has been installed on."
 
 outfit "Ruksay Missile"
 	cost 525
@@ -313,7 +324,7 @@ outfit "Ruksay Missile Launcher"
 		"hit force" 170
 		"missile strength" 6
 		"phasing"
-	description "The missiles this launches are not as good at tracking and don't do splash damage the way the Rukjay missiles do, but some captains regard the nonexistence of heat creation as worth it for the less powerful defenses."
+	description "Ruksag missiles are not as good at tracking and don't do splash damage the way Rukjay missiles do, but some captains regard the nonexistence of heat creation as worth it for the lessening defenses."
 
 outfit "Rukjay Missile"
 	cost 875
@@ -333,7 +344,7 @@ outfit "Rukjay Missile Launcher"
 	"outfit space" -18
 	"weapon capacity" -18
 	"gun ports" -1
-	"rukjay capacity" 30
+	"rukjay capacity" 45
 	weapon
 		sprite "projectile/rukjay"
 			"frame rate" 4
@@ -370,7 +381,7 @@ outfit "Rukjay Missile Launcher"
 		"safe"
 		"fused"
 		"phasing"
-	description "The missiles this launches have great tracking and do some splash damage at the cost of generating some heat. Most Jibauni captains regard the tracking as good enough to more than make up for the heat inefficiency."
+	description "Rukjay missiles have great tracking and do some splash damage at the cost of generating some heat. Most Jibauni captains regard the tracking as good enough to more than make up for the heat inefficiency."
 
 effect "jibauni missile hit"
 	sprite "effect/explosion/medium"