fix(typo): Various typo fixes (endless-sky#10453)

Author: TheGiraffe3

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data/bunrodea/bunrodea ships.txt

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ ship "Sasumata"
 	explode "medium explosion" 20
 	explode "large explosion" 5
 	"final explode" "final explosion small"
-	description "The Sasumata is the chief scout ship of the Bunrodea. While not designed for combat, this stealth transport vessel is still capable of holding its all against some smaller warships; its four fighter bays turn the Sasumata into a force to be reckoned with when its fighters are deployed."
+	description "The Sasumata is the chief scout ship of the Bunrodea. While not designed for combat, this stealth transport vessel is still capable of holding its own against some smaller warships; its four fighter bays turn the Sasumata into a force to be reckoned with when its fighters are deployed."
 
 
 

data/coalition/coalition missions.txt

@@ -3153,7 +3153,7 @@ mission "Heliarchs Buy Jump Drive Mission"
 				log "Factions" "Saryds" `Saryds are an alien species who look suspiciously similar to the centaurs found in early human mythology. They prefer to live on worlds with as much green space as possible, and even their major cities are full of parks and gardens. Most Saryds live in small communes with up to a few dozen of them per house.`
 				log "Factions" "Kimek" `The Kimek are large insectoid aliens, and are members of the Coalition. They discovered spaceflight after the Saryds, but before the Arachi. They are intensely social creatures, preferring to live together in massive buildings with thousands of inhabitants, and many of their worlds have populations in the tens of billions, far more than any human world.`
 				log "Factions" "Arachi" `The spider-like Arachi were the last of the three Coalition species to discover interstellar travel. Most members of their society owe allegiance to one of the great Arach "Houses," organizations that are somewhat similar to guilds and that each specialize in one particular form of industry or technology.`
-			`	She thanks you yet again, salutes, and leaves to follow the entourage guarding the newly purchased jump drive. Not a minute after she has left, three more Heliarchs arrive at your ship, a delegation consisting of a member of each of the three Coalition species, all wearing golden circlets denoting their rank and authority. "A most unexpected, but greatly value contribution this is," the Saryd says, "to think that so eager would our visitor be to prove their diligence and commitment."`
+			`	She thanks you yet again, salutes, and leaves to follow the entourage guarding the newly purchased jump drive. Not a minute after she has left, three more Heliarchs arrive at your ship, a delegation consisting of a member of each of the three Coalition species, all wearing golden circlets denoting their rank and authority. "A most unexpected, but greatly valued contribution this is," the Saryd says, "to think that so eager would our visitor be to prove their diligence and commitment."`
 			`	The Kimek says, "As aided you have our society in breaking free of the Quarg's cages, with our society's technology may you be trusted."`
 			`	"But," says the Arach, "like all civilians, even citizens, to you our weapons and warships we still cannot sell."`
 			choice

data/drak/drak outfits.txt

@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ outfit "Drak Draining Field"
 		"scrambling damage" .5
 		"disruption damage" 1
 		"safe"
-	description "This device is the Archon's primary defensive tool: Not only does it disrupt the shields and energy supplies of all hostile ships within it, it also exerts a powerful repelling force that keeps ships from closing in with the Archon."
+	description "This device is the Archon's primary defensive tool: not only does it disrupt the shields and energy supplies of all hostile ships within it, it also exerts a powerful repelling force that keeps ships from closing in with the Archon."
 
 
 outfit "Drak Draining Field (Augmented)"
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ outfit "Drak Draining Field (Augmented)"
 		"scrambling damage" 1
 		"disruption damage" 2
 		"safe"
-	description "This device is the Archon's primary defensive tool: Not only does it disrupt the shields and energy supplies of all hostile ships within it, it also exerts a powerful repelling force that keeps ships from closing in with the Archon."
+	description "This device is the Archon's primary defensive tool: not only does it disrupt the shields and energy supplies of all hostile ships within it, it also exerts a powerful repelling force that keeps ships from closing in with the Archon."
 	description "	While normally kept at minimal strength, the Archons have demonstrated the ability to ramp up the field to be vastly stronger when faced with a serious threat."
 
 
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ outfit "Drak Turret"
 		"shield damage" 256
 		"hull damage" 256
 		"hit force" 180
-	description "This is a turret based cannon with significant range and accuracy."
+	description "This is a turret-based cannon with significant range and accuracy."
 
 
 outfit "Drak Turret (Augmented)"
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ outfit "Drak Turret (Augmented)"
 		"shield damage" 2560
 		"hull damage" 2560
 		"hit force" 180
-	description "This is a turret based cannon with significant range and accuracy."
+	description "This is a turret-based cannon with significant range and accuracy."
 	description "	Against most threats, Archons respond with their weapons set to very low levels. They are, however, more than capable of dealing much more damage when the situation requires it."
 
 effect "drak bolt impact"

data/hai/hai reveal 2 start.txt

@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Ooonem"
 	on offer
 		conversation
 			branch transmitter
-				has "Oonem Transmitter"
+				has "Ooonem Transmitter"
 			branch nohint
 				and
 					not "Hai Rescue: Ooonem Hint: offered"
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Ooonem"
 				`	(Investigate for yourself.)`
 				`	(Come back later.)`
 					defer
-			`	Following reports of the last time the "angel of death" was sighted, you end up loitering in a twisting street parallel to a main thoroughfare. The few people using it hurry by quickly, and rarely seem to travel any great distance down this street. One very surly looking individual gives you a sour glare on his way past, a collection of weapons on full display. He looks a lot like you'd expect a bounty hunter to look, and as he moves out of sight you observe a shadow, previously motionless, detach from a spot on a wall and head back your direction, laser rifle pointed in the direction of the departing individual. As the shadow approaches, you see there's a lot of hair sticking out from their hood. Seems you may have indeed found a Hai. Do you want to talk to them?`
+			`	Following reports of the last time the "angel of death" was sighted, you end up loitering in a twisting street parallel to a main thoroughfare. The few people using it hurry by quickly, and rarely seem to travel any great distance down this street. One very surly looking individual gives you a sour glare on his way past, a collection of weapons on full display. He looks a lot like you'd expect a bounty hunter to look, and as he moves out of sight you observe a shadow, previously motionless, detach from a spot on a wall and head back your direction, laser rifle pointed in the direction of the departing individual. As the shadow approaches, you see there's a lot of hair sticking out from their hood. It seems you may have indeed found a Hai. Do you want to talk to them?`
 			label start
 			choice
 				`	(Talk to them.)`
@@ -259,16 +259,16 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Ooonem"
 				`	"Sorry to bother you. I'll leave you to your business."`
 					goto decline
 			label hai
-			`	"I was going to meet a businessman on Shroud to arrange a large-scale import deal for my research project. I asked a human merchant to take me there, but I was tricked. The businessman doesn't really exist, and the deal was faked. The merchant locked me in a cell and brought me here instead. When he opened the cell, I managed to grab his rifle, shoot him, and hide. It's amazing how slowly humans move."`
+			`	"I was going to meet a businessman on Shroud to arrange a large-scale import deal for my research project. I asked a human merchant to take me there, but I was tricked. The businessman doesn't really exist, and the deal was faked. The merchant locked me in a cell and brought me here instead. When he opened the cell, I managed to grab his rifle, shoot him, and hide. It's amazing how slowly humans move.`
 				goto "more questions"
 			label who
-			`	"There are some men looking for me. I've managed to escape them so far; they're not as quick as a Hai. I think they're friends of the merchant who locked me up."`
+			`	"There are some men looking for me. I've managed to escape them so far; they're not as quick as a Hai. I think they're friends of the merchant who locked me up.`
 				goto "more questions"
 			label pay
-			`	"I have no money with me, but my family on <planet> can pay."`
+			`	"I have no money with me, but my family on <planet> can pay.`
 				goto "more questions"
 			label "more questions"
-			`	Can you take me back to <destination>? My family can pay for my return.`
+			`	"Can you take me back to <destination>? My family can pay for my return."`
 			choice
 				`	"Yes, I'll take you there."`
 				`	"How much will you pay me?"`
@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Ooonem"
 					goto who
 				`	"Sorry, but you'll have to find another ride."`
 					goto decline
-			`	Good, but now I must ask, is your ship capable? Are you sure? The pirates are fully aware I am here and will likely chase you, even if you're in good standing with the local authorities. I'd rather not die on your ship.`
+			`	"Good, but now I must ask, is your ship capable? Are you sure? The pirates are fully aware I am here and will likely chase you, even if you're in good standing with the local authorities. I'd rather not die on your ship."`
 			choice
 				`	"Don't worry. I know how to dodge pirates."`
 					goto go
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Ooonem"
 					decline
 			`	She looks at you curiously. "You're a good one, aren't you? Very well, take this transmitter. When you return, come back to this area. Activate it, and I will find you. Come alone."`
 			action
-				set "Oonem Transmitter"
+				set "Ooonem Transmitter"
 			`	She quickly keys something into the transmitter, and it beeps before displaying a locked icon on the screen. As soon as she has handed it over, she turns and melts down an alley which you weren't even entirely aware of. The transmitter in your hand is small, and looks custom modified. Whoever this Hai is, she's capable.`
 				defer
 			label transmitter
@@ -308,13 +308,13 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Ooonem"
 			`	The woman shakes her head at you and runs off into the shadows. You doubt you'll ever see her again.`
 				decline
 	on accept
-		dialog `Those pursuing Oonem have caught on quickly and followed you into orbit. You'll probably have to fight them, but they're only Core pirates and don't look equipped to make the journey back to Hai space successfully. If you're fast enough, you could probably attempt to simply dodge them instead.`
+		dialog `Those pursuing Ooonem have caught on quickly and followed you into orbit. You'll probably have to fight them, but they're only Core pirates and don't look equipped to make the journey back to Hai space successfully. If you're fast enough, you could probably attempt to simply dodge them instead.`
 	on complete
 		log `Rescued a kidnapped Hai researcher, Ooonem, from Stormhold and returned her to Makerplace. She was tricked into leaving Hai space for a fake business deal, and the merchant who agreed to take her there kidnapped her instead. Men have been hunting her since she escaped. She doesn't know the real identities of the kidnappers.`
-		log "Minor People" "Oonem" `A Hai researcher with a remarkable talent for stealth and laser rifles. Also a predilection for shooting first and not taking prisoners. She escaped kidnapping and survived independently on <origin> for a remarkable length of time where she acquired the moniker "angel of death." She's also quite the capitalist.`
+		log "Minor People" "Ooonem" `A Hai researcher with a remarkable talent for stealth and laser rifles. Also a predilection for shooting first and not taking prisoners. She escaped kidnapping and survived independently on <origin> for a remarkable length of time where she acquired the moniker "angel of death." She's also quite the capitalist.`
 		payment 225000
 		"hai slave prereq" ++
-		dialog `Ooonem is relieved to return to <planet>. She leads you to her family's home where you're treated to a bountiful dinner. The cuisine is entirely human-Hai fusion dishes. The dessert is accompanied by what Oonem describes as the most delicious spice of all: <payment>.`
+		dialog `Ooonem is relieved to return to <planet>. She leads you to her family's home where you're treated to a bountiful dinner. The cuisine is entirely human-Hai fusion dishes. The dessert is accompanied by what Ooonem describes as the most delicious spice of all: <payment>.`
 	npc
 		government "Bounty Hunter that Won't Enter Hai Space"
 		personality plunders disables unconstrained
@@ -390,14 +390,14 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Prison Role-Players"
 				`	"Sorry, maybe another time."`
 					defer
 			label who
-			`	"You don't remember me? I was the first Hai you met. You were so confused back then and didn't know who or what we were. It was very cute."`
+			`	"You don't remember me? I was the first Hai you met. You were so confused back then and didn't know who or what we were. It was very cute.`
 				goto questions
 			label how
 			`	"There are prison role-play cruises in Hai space where we can ride in a brig with human security guards. My research group thought it would be a fun experience, so we all chartered one," she says.`
-			`	"Unfortunately, it was a trick! They were pirates and took us into human space instead. They didn't feed us much, so we all pretended to be too weak to stand. When one of the pirates came in to check on us, we overpowered him. I don't know if they got sloppy or if they were just new at this, but it seems they had forgotten how fast we can be. The other pirate set the ship to crash-land and used an escape pod. Now we're stuck here."`
+			`	"Unfortunately, it was a trick! They were pirates and took us into human space instead. They didn't feed us much, so we all pretended to be too weak to stand. When one of the pirates came in to check on us, we overpowered him. I don't know if they got sloppy or if they were just new at this, but it seems they had forgotten how fast we can be. The other pirate set the ship to crash-land and used an escape pod. Now we're stuck here.`
 				goto questions
 			label pay
-			`	"Ah, well, we can give you what is left of our travel budget: <payment>. The money is on <planet> though, so you'll have to fly us there first."`
+			`	"Ah, well, we can give you what is left of our travel budget: <payment>. The money is on <planet> though, so you'll have to fly us there first.`
 				goto questions
 			label go
 			`	"Excellent! Everyone pile aboard. Let's go back to <planet>!"`
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Prison Role-Players"
 		payment 565000
 		"hai slave prereq" ++
 		dialog `The Hai researchers thank you for rescuing them from their ill-fated "prison role-play cruise" and promise to stick to safer pastimes in the future. They happily give you <payment>.`
-	# No NPCs for this one since the Pirates are presumed dead.
+	# No NPCs for this one since the pirates are presumed dead.
 
 
 
@@ -487,8 +487,8 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Meroot and Lucy"
 			label "come in"
 			`	The person in the background stills. "What did you say?"`
 			`	You repeat the phrase.`
-			`	Somewhere out of sight you hear a string Hai words that sound very exasperated before they address Lucy again. "Let them in, Lucy, they probably are here to help."`
-			`	The emphasis placed on the 'are' is thick, and it seems to snap Lucy out of her frozen state. "Oh, uh, yes, alright. If you could fly us to <planet>, we can pay you when we arrive. You'll likely be followed though, so I hope you have a fast ship. I think you should probably come in, and we'll talk about it."`
+			`	Somewhere out of sight you hear a string of Hai words that sound very exasperated before they address Lucy again. "Let them in, Lucy, they probably are here to help."`
+			`	The emphasis placed on the "are" is thick, and it seems to snap Lucy out of her frozen state. "Oh, uh, yes, alright. If you could fly us to <planet>, we can pay you when we arrive. You'll likely be followed though, so I hope you have a fast ship. I think you should probably come in, and we'll talk about it."`
 			choice
 				`	(Enter their alcove.)`
 				`	"No, I can't help you get home."`
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ mission "Hai Rescue: Meroot and Lucy"
 				`	"Sure. Let's go."`
 				`	"No, you'll have to find another pilot."`
 					decline
-			`	The two women put on clothing that thoroughly covers their person. They lead you through a series of ducts and alleys back to the pad where your ship is parked. Just as your airlock opens there's a sharp zapping sound as someone shoots Meroot with a stun gun. You and Lucy duck, and a couple other shots dissipate harmlessly on the bulkhead of your ship. You fire off a couple shots back and, between the two of you, manage to drag Meroot through the airlock, seal it behind you, and lift off. It appears you're being followed into orbit.`
+			`	The two women put on clothing that thoroughly covers their persons. They lead you through a series of ducts and alleys back to the pad where your ship is parked. Just as your airlock opens there's a sharp zapping sound as someone shoots Meroot with a stun gun. You and Lucy duck, and a couple other shots dissipate harmlessly on the bulkhead of your ship. You fire off a couple shots back and, between the two of you, manage to drag Meroot through the airlock, seal it behind you, and lift off. It appears you're being followed into orbit.`
 				launch
 	on complete
 		log `Rescued a pair of researchers: a Hai woman named Meroot and a human woman named Lucy. They were kidnapped by men who brought them to Canyon. Returned them to <planet> where they now live together. They don't know the identities of the kidnappers.`

data/remnant/remnant.txt

@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ phrase "remnant"
 
 phrase "remnant uncontacted"
 	word
-		"(They sent you a hail consisting of a sign language you don't understand.)"
+		"(They send you a hail consisting of a sign language you don't understand.)"
 		"(You hear a short song about how scanning them will be considered a hostile action.)"
 		`"If you value the continued survival of humanity, do not scan our ships," a strangely melodic voice says.`
 		`"If you value your continued survival, do not scan our ships." The voice speaks with a tone reminiscent of singing.`
@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ phrase "remnant uncontacted hostile"
 
 phrase "remnant uncontacted hostile"
 	word
-		"(They sent you hail consisting of a sign language you don't understand, and it doesn't seem friendly.)"
+		"(They send you hail consisting of a sign language you don't understand, and it doesn't seem friendly.)"
 		"(They sign so quickly that your hail receiver can't process it all.)"
 		"(It seems you are not welcome here.)"
 
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ phrase "remnant friendly (aliens?)"
 		"How strong are they"
 		"What are the odds of capturing their ships"
 		"Has your government met them"
-		"Is it worth trying to get my hands on their tech?"
+		"Is it worth trying to get my hands on their tech"
 	word
 		"?"
 
@@ -975,8 +975,8 @@ phrase "remnant hostile (you were)"
 		"not hostile"
 		"friendly"
 		"good"
-		"teammates"
-		"allies"
+		"a teammate"
+		"an ally"