New Andwerfen description

Author: TheGiraffe3

data/map planets.txt

@@ -195,10 +195,9 @@ planet Amazon
 planet Andwerfen
 	attributes capital jibauni "rebel jibauni" "seat of government"
 	landscape land/andwerfen
-	description `That this is the place where the Rebels have their government is easy to see, because there are many fortified buildings and bunkers in readiness to shoot any invaders, and the many planetary defenses are very powerful.`
-	description `	The credit for discovering this planet goes to Wahlkin, a Jibauni who had once been a peaceful planet-dweller. Eventually, however, he started exploring, and subsequently started the colony of Andwerfen, which grew into the planet it is today.`	description `	Many Jibauni wish that Andwerfen had never been founded.`
-	description `	Many Jibauni wish that Andwerfen had never been founded.`
-	spaceport `Little is here except for the many armed patrols the Rebel Jibauni keep patrolling the neighborhoods, looking for disrupters of the peace. The Jibauni around you all look frightened, and the number here that must wish to get back to normal Jibauni space must be large.`
+	description `Obviously, Andwerfen is occupied by the Rebel Jibauni government. Fortified buildings and bunkers dot the whole city, in readiness to shoot invaders, and planetary defenses jut out of the landscape everywhere - even on the tops of buildings.`
+	description `	Wahlkin, a Jibauni once a peaceful planet-dweller, was inspired by stories of new spacecraft and heroic feats of flight. Eventually he started exploring, and subsequently started the colony of Andwerfen, now grown into a full-fledged military academy.`
+	spaceport `The spaceport is filled by armed patrols keeping an eye out for any sign of rebellion. Every Jibauni you see wears a frightened expression, and many wish to escape back to normal Jibauni space.`
 
 planet Angko
 	attributes bunrodea factory manufacturing